SCRIPTWRITING SERVICES
Screenplay Coverage & Story Analysis
Your Script Under the Microscope
Olena ChepurnaScreenwriter • Story Consultant • Screenplay Analyst
This service is designed for writers who already have a completed first draft of a screenplay.
I work with authors of:
• Feature-length screenplays
• Short films
• TV pilot episodes
The goal of this service is not to rewrite your script, but to identify what works, what doesn’t, and how to strengthen the story before the next draft.
What Is Screenplay Coverage
A professional screenplay analysis based on industry coverage standards used by studios, producers, and international screenwriting competitions.
Your script will be evaluated from both creative and market perspectives.
You will receive clear, practical recommendations on how to improve the script.
What’s Included
1. Full Script Reading
Careful reading of your screenplay (short film, feature film, or pilot episode).
2. Professional Coverage Report (PDF)
A 5–10 page written analysis including:
• Logline evaluation• Short story summary• Structural analysis• Character analysis• Conflict and stakes• Pacing and scene flow• Dialogue evaluation• Genre and market positioning
3. Story Structure Analysis
Evaluation of:
• story concept• dramatic tension• turning points• act structure (3-act or 4-act)• escalation of conflict• narrative clarity
4. Characters & Character Arcs
• protagonist goal and motivation• character transformation• antagonist strength• character dynamics• emotional engagement
5. Dialogue & Scene Function
• naturalness of dialogue• subtext and intention• scene purpose• balance between action and dialogue
6. Genre & Market Positioning
• genre expectations• originality of concept• audience potential• possible production scale• festival / studio / platform potential
7. Script Strengthening Plan
You receive clear actionable recommendations, including:
• what should be changed• what should be strengthened• which elements work well• what producers or competitions might question
This is a development roadmap for the next draft.
8. Two Online Consultation Sessions
Two live sessions (Zoom / Google Meet) to discuss:
• feedback on the script• questions about the analysis• strategy for the next rewrite
What Screenplay Coverage Is Not
This service is not script rewriting, but a professional analysis that helps the writer strengthen their own screenplay in the next draft.
What Is NOT Included
This service does not include:
• rewriting the script for the author
• writing new scenes
• line-by-line editing of the screenplay
• ghostwriting
• formatting corrections
• guarantee of sales, production, or festival selection
The goal is professional analysis and strategic guidance, not rewriting the script.
Who This Service Is For
• writers who have completed their first draft
• authors preparing scripts for competitions or producers
• filmmakers developing short films or independent features
• screenwriters who want professional industry-level feedback
Pricing
Basic
Screenplay Coverage
A concise professional evaluation of your script.
Includes
• full script reading• 3–5 page coverage report (PDF)• logline evaluation• short synopsis of the story• analysis of structure, characters, conflict, pacing, and dialogue• notes on genre and market positioning• clear actionable recommendations for improvement• 1 online consultation (30 min) to discuss a project
Delivery: 5–7 days
Price: $120
PRO
Coverage + Strategy Session
A deeper professional analysis with discussion of the script.
Includes
Everything in Basic, plus:
• extended coverage report (5–10 pages)• detailed structural analysis• character arc evaluation• development recommendations for the next draft• 1 online consultation (30 min) to discuss a project and 1 online video meeting to discuss a feedback and revisions
Delivery: 7–10 days
Price: $200
DEVELOPMENT LAB
Script Development Partnership
A collaborative development process designed to help you transform your first draft into a stronger second draft.
Includes
Everything in Pro, plus:
• deeper script analysis• scene-level development suggestions• guidance on strengthening dramatic conflict• help refining logline and concept• 3 online development sessions (60 min each)• rewrite strategy and development roadmap
Delivery: 10–14 days
Price: $400
SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXAMPLES
Below are sample screenplay analyses demonstrating how professional story coverage identifies both the strengths of a well-constructed script and the structural weaknesses that can prevent a story from reaching its full potential.
Masterpiece Analysis
Example of a Perfectly Built Story
One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest
✔ Clear central conflict
✔ Powerful protagonist vs antagonist dynamic
✔ Strong thematic architecture
✔ Emotional payoff in Act III
This analysis demonstrates how great storytelling functions when every narrative element supports the central theme.
Development Case Study
Example of a Script That Needs Structural Work
This analysis demonstrates how screenplay coverage identifies problems in:
• story structure
• character motivation
• weak dramatic stakes
• unclear theme
• pacing issues
Instead of simply criticizing a script, the goal is to show how the story can be strengthened through development.
Why Work With Me
● Professional Screenwriting PerspectiveI approach scripts not only as a consultant, but as a working screenwriter developing original film and television projects. My feedback is focused on storytelling that works both creatively and commercially.
● Festival & Industry ExperienceI have worked with international film festivals and understand how scripts are evaluated by readers, judges, and development executives.
● Structured Analytical ApproachMy background in teaching and story analysis allows me to break down complex narrative problems into clear, actionable steps that writers can apply in their next draft.
● International PerspectiveI work with writers from different countries and understand the expectations of global audiences, film festivals, and streaming platforms.
● Focus on Development, Not Just CritiqueMy goal is not simply to point out weaknesses, but to help writers strengthen the story and move the script to the next level.
● Respect for the Author’s VoiceI never rewrite scripts for writers. Instead, I help you improve the story while preserving your unique voice and creative vision.
What Writers Gain From This Service
Writers gain a clear, professional understanding of their script’s strengths, weaknesses, and the specific steps needed to strengthen the next draft.
FAQ
What exactly is this service?
Your Script Under the Microscope is a professional screenplay analysis service. I read your script closely and break down how it works on the page: structure, conflict, character arcs, dialogue, theme, pacing, and overall story design. The goal is not just to point out problems, but to explain why they happen and how the script can become stronger.
What will I receive?
You will receive a written analysis of your screenplay. Depending on the package, this may include an evaluation summary, structural breakdown, character analysis, thematic analysis, notes on dialogue and pacing, and development suggestions.
Is this the same as script editing or rewriting?
No. This is analysis, not ghostwriting. I do not rewrite the screenplay for you. Instead, I show you where the story is working, where it is losing power, and what needs to be strengthened so you can revise with clarity.
Is this service only for finished scripts?
No. You can send a finished draft, an early draft, or even a screenplay that you know is still messy. In many cases, analysis is most useful before the script is polished, because it helps identify deeper structural issues early.
What genres do you work with?
I work with feature screenplays across multiple genres, including drama, thriller, sci-fi, fantasy, animation, psychological stories, and emotionally driven character narratives. If the story has ambition, conflict, and cinematic intention, it can be analyzed.
Will you be brutally honest?
Yes, but never careless.
My goal is not to “destroy” a script. My goal is to tell the truth about what is happening on the page in a way that is clear, professional, and useful. Strong coverage should help the writer grow, not shut them down.What if my script has serious problems?
That is exactly why coverage exists.
A weak second act, unclear protagonist goal, flat dialogue, low stakes, tonal confusion, or an ending that does not land — all of these can be identified and addressed. The earlier you see the problem, the easier it is to fix.Do you only focus on flaws?
No. I also identify strengths.
A screenplay develops best when the writer understands both:
what is not working and what is already powerful.
Part of my job is to help you protect the strongest parts of your script while improving the weak ones.Can this help if I want to submit to competitions, producers, or festivals?
Yes. This service is especially useful if you plan to submit your screenplay professionally. Coverage helps you understand whether the script is clear, emotionally effective, structurally solid, and ready for readers in the industry.
Do you analyze theme, symbolism, and deeper meaning — or only structure?
I analyze both.
I look at the screenplay as a story system: structure, character, conflict, pacing, visual storytelling, theme, symbolism, and emotional effect. If something deeper is already present in your script, I will identify it. If something is missing, I will show where the meaning is not fully landing.What is the difference between Basic, Pro, and Development Lab?
The difference is depth.
Basic gives you a focused professional overview.
Pro goes deeper into structure, character, and thematic dynamics.
Development Lab is the most detailed option, designed for writers who want a more intensive analytical breakdown of how the story functions and where it needs serious development work.
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