WHO IS THIS SERVICE FOR?

This service is designed for independent screenwriters who have completed the first, second, or third draft of a feature screenplay and want professional feedback before moving forward.
You may benefit from screenplay coverage if:
● You've finished your screenplay but aren't sure whether the story works as intended.● You feel something isn't working but can't identify the problem.● You're struggling with your protagonist's motivation, central conflict, or story structure.● You've received conflicting feedback and need a structured professional assessment.● You're preparing another draft and want to understand which issues to address first.● You're considering submitting your screenplay to competitions, producers, or production companies.● You don't need someone to rewrite your story. You need to understand what's working, what isn't, and why.

WHAT DO I ANALYZE?

Every screenplay is different, but every story depends on the relationship between its essential dramatic elements.
My STORYWORKS Diagnostic System examines the following areas:
1. CONCEPT & PREMISE
Is the central concept clear? Does the premise provide enough dramatic potential to sustain a feature-length story? What makes this particular story distinctive?
2. GENRE & TARGET AUDIENCE
Does the screenplay establish a recognizable genre? Are its tone, conventions, and audience expectations consistent with the story being told?
3. STORY WORLD & RULES
Where does the story take place? How does its world function? Are the rules, limitations, and circumstances clearly established and consistently maintained?
4. PROTAGONIST & CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT
Who drives the story? What does the protagonist want, what do they need, and what prevents them from achieving their goal?
I examine character motivations, flaws, internal conflicts, decisions, and relationships.
5. CENTRAL CONFLICT & STAKES
What is the main dramatic conflict? Who or what opposes the protagonist? Are the obstacles meaningful, and do the consequences become more significant as the story progresses?
6. THREE-ACT STRUCTURE & TURNING POINTS
Does the screenplay establish a clear dramatic progression?
I examine the setup, confrontation, resolution, major turning points, and the cause-and-effect relationships between events.
7. CHARACTER ARCS & TRANSFORMATION
How do the characters change throughout the story? Are their transformations motivated by the events, choices, and consequences they experience?
8. SUPPORTING CHARACTERS & RELATIONSHIPS
Do supporting characters have clear dramatic functions? How do their relationships with the protagonist influence the central conflict and story development?
9. DIALOGUE, PACING & DRAMATIC DEVELOPMENT
Does the dialogue reveal character and advance the story? Are scenes purposeful? Does the pacing support tension, emotional engagement, and narrative progression?
10. OVERALL STORY EFFECTIVENESS
Do all the elements work together to create a coherent and engaging story?
What are the screenplay's greatest strengths, and which issues should receive priority in the next draft?

WHAT IS INCLUDED?

Full Screenplay Reading
Your complete feature screenplay is read and evaluated.
Professional Story Analysis
A structured assessment using my STORYWORKS Diagnostic System.
Detailed PDF Report
Written observations, explanations, and recommendations you can refer to during revisions.
60-Minute Individual Video Consultation
A private online meeting to discuss the report, clarify feedback, and explore possible solutions.
Priorities for Your Next Draft
A clearer understanding of which elements need attention and how you might approach the rewriting process.
The goal is not simply to receive feedback. It's to understand your story well enough to make informed decisions about its next draft.

HOW IT WORKS

STEP 1. FREE INITIAL CONSULTATION
Up to 30 Minutes | Online
We begin with a free individual video meeting to discuss your screenplay and determine whether my services are appropriate for your project.
During this meeting, we discuss:
● Your screenplay's genre and current stage of development.● Your goals and expectations.● The type of feedback you're looking for.● My diagnostic approach and working process.● The scope of analysis, pricing, and terms of our collaboration.
You can ask questions about the service before making a decision.
Please note: I do not accept or review screenplay materials before our initial online consultation and an agreement on the terms of our collaboration.
STEP 2. SCREENPLAY SUBMISSION & ANALYSIS
Once we agree to work together, you submit your complete screenplay by email.
I read the entire screenplay and conduct a detailed analysis using my STORYWORKS Diagnostic System.
Rather than focusing only on isolated problems, I examine how the story's elements interact and how individual weaknesses may affect the screenplay as a whole.
The purpose is to understand not only what isn't working, but why.
STEP 3. DETAILED SCREENPLAY REPORT
After completing the analysis, I prepare a detailed written report.
Your report includes:
● An assessment of the screenplay's main dramatic elements.● Observations about its strengths and weaknesses.● Explanations of the most significant story problems.● Specific recommendations for improvement.● Priorities to consider when preparing your next draft.
The report gives you a written reference you can return to throughout the rewriting process.
Typical turnaround: I can usually complete the screenplay analysis and prepare the report within three days of receiving your screenplay. The delivery schedule is confirmed individually before work begins.
STEP 4. INDIVIDUAL LIVE CONSULTATION
60 Minutes | Online
Once you've received and reviewed your PDF report, we meet for a private 60-minute video consultation.
This is your opportunity to discuss the analysis directly with me.
During our meeting, we can:
● Clarify any notes or recommendations in the report.● Examine specific problems with the story's structure, characters, or conflict.● Discuss possible approaches to resolving those problems.● Explore how different creative decisions might affect the story.● Identify the most important priorities for your next draft.● Address your questions about the screenplay.
You remain in control of every creative decision.
My role is to help you understand the possibilities, not to impose my own version of your story.

WHY LIVE SCREENPLAY COVERAGE?

Because Written Notes Don't Always Tell the Whole Story

A written report can identify a structural problem, an unclear motivation, or a weak turning point.

But every screenwriter has their own intentions, creative priorities, and questions.

A live consultation creates an opportunity to discuss those intentions and understand the reasoning behind the feedback.

You can ask why a particular scene may not be working, explain what you intended to communicate, and explore alternative approaches.

Instead of receiving a report and being left to interpret it alone, you have the opportunity to discuss the findings with the person who analyzed your screenplay.

Written analysis gives you the notes. Our conversation helps you understand how to use them.

PRICING

Every screenplay is different.
The cost of professional screenplay coverage is calculated individually based on:
● Screenplay length.● Genre and complexity.● Scope of the requested analysis.● Specific project requirements.
The price includes the complete screenplay reading and analysis, a detailed PDF report, and one 60-minute individual video consultation.
Additional consultations can be arranged separately.
We discuss the scope of work and pricing during your free initial consultation.
There is no obligation to proceed after our first meeting.

IMPORTANT INFORMATION

Screenplay Submission
I do not accept or review screenplay materials before our initial online consultation and an agreement on the terms of our collaboration.
Creative Ownership
You remain the author of your screenplay and retain control over your creative decisions.
Scope of Services
My screenplay coverage focuses on story analysis, dramatic development, and recommendations for improvement.
I do not rewrite your screenplay as part of this service.
I do not provide producer introductions, production financing, or guarantees of representation, competition success, screenplay sales, or production.
Additional Consultations
If you would like further guidance after completing the initial coverage package, additional consultations can be discussed and arranged separately.